Monday, October 21, 2013

Narrative Writing

We are working hard on our narrative writings about a memorable event.
Here are a few pictures of us revising...
Looking for sensory details

We have transition words in our writing!

finding "glows" and "grows"

did they use dialogue?

humm... does this part "sound" good?
Remember tonight we are reading our writings to someone at home.
Don't forget to have that adult help you peer edit tonight!

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